1. Dress Izzy appropriately for this kind of artist - you must by now know what the conventions are of image for this genre. Your digipack has roses so dress her in something feminine and aspirational, not a business suit and big baggy jumper - this really is not appropriate to sell to your presumably mainstream, young, female audience with inadequacy issues.
2. Film Izzy in a dark room and use lighting (this is absolutely vital at advanced level which is why we studied it - 'stylistic lighting' remember - this will representing her state of mind.
3. Shoot the performance 6 more times from different angles (mainly close ups and maybe silhouetted. You cannot move your marks up from Level 2/3 border without this.
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2. Film Izzy in a dark room and use lighting (this is absolutely vital at advanced level which is why we studied it - 'stylistic lighting' remember - this will representing her state of mind.
3. Shoot the performance 6 more times from different angles (mainly close ups and maybe silhouetted. You cannot move your marks up from Level 2/3 border without this.